Wednesday, September 9, 2009

Feedback Please

Well this is to request you to please leave you're feedback.I would definately know if i used the write words to express my point and if my novel was liked,hated,detested or loved my you.Thank you for taking time to read my novel.
Posted by Neha Khungar at 4:20 AM
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10 comments:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 9, 2009 at 10:23 AM

    gr8 work neha
    the end realy touched my heart
    kp writing..kudos!!
    -divya

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  2. funkyraveSeptember 9, 2009 at 12:37 PM

    I dont know where to start.It certainly evoked a nostalgia in me.. teenage fantasies, school, Friends..etc. I really liked the way you portrayed the phases of Zoya's life and transition between them were so justified.
    Both proposals at the stroke of midnight were great.Zoya and Karan's characters were aptly portrayed.Overall it was really awesome with no loopholes. Just one thing.. Use of 'well' and 'apparently' were redundant. Keep it up Gal.. Someday we all would really like to pick up a book by u from a bookstore..
    all d best. cheerio

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  3. AnonymousSeptember 9, 2009 at 7:41 PM

    Great job dahling! Loved reading your thoughts and it gave me insight into the years of your life - the many years that I have not been a part of.

    Zoya is a fabulous character and well portrayed as the every day, 'not so popular' girl next door. Question for ya, why the name Zoya and what color was the 'scootie'? :)

    Keep it up doll! Perhaps take those thoughts of yours and as you write them down, start scribing the way you would if you were a famous, published author. Write believing that the minute the manuscript hits the presses, a million eyes will be lapping up your words ;)

    xoxo :b

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  4. PrateekSeptember 10, 2009 at 3:57 AM

    u are amazing, neha!

    ive neva read novels n stuff before.. but this one jus made me keep readin.. btw hope dis waznt a secret autobiography..

    will be waitin for yor new novels/blogs/etc.. do keep me updated.. luv ya!

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  5. AnonymousSeptember 10, 2009 at 10:16 AM

    awesome!!

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  6. poonam bhatewaraSeptember 11, 2009 at 4:23 AM

    hey sweety luv to see such gud outcome for ur first ever writting initiative of such kind ......see wat have i told u ppl will definately like it ........after all i liked it heheheeeee......keep up the gud work sweety ...without any loopholes wish to buy ur words from a bookstore soon :),,ur these words which u portrayed in a form of novel are just fantabulous ....cheers babes......keep going
    poonam

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  7. Udit MandeSeptember 12, 2009 at 1:23 PM

    hey gud work neha..........i like ur novel.....keep writing.......n keep smiling.... :)

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  8. chunkySeptember 13, 2009 at 4:43 PM

    hey frm where to start , rili dunno.... ah mean it was amazing n a heart touching novel...

    i usually don read novels i hate reading all dis idiotic love stories...but u knw wat wen i started reading ... wen it came to an end...Zoya n her Love knws dat...

    u knw na we were tlkin abt wishlist...i wish Karan cumin back in Zoya's life...n dey live happily forever n ever...

    but its all matter of tym.. u were rite...

    but now m desperately waiting for ur next upcumin novel....so buh byeee....cheers...n stay happy... ChUnKy....!!

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  9. UnknownOctober 23, 2012 at 3:24 AM

    nice

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  10. UnknownFebruary 11, 2015 at 10:47 PM

    Itz amazing n touchy story..!! I really like it.👌👍
    and will wait for another one :p

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